The writing is grammatically correct, but it just doesn't flow.
The ability of a liquid paint film to spread out evenly after application to produce a surface free from application irregularities such as orange peel
Resistance of movement by a liquid material, divided into four categories; Newtonian (simple) flow, plastic flow, pseudoplastic (thixotropic) flow and dilatant flow
a progress of energy between two points; an impulse or direction of energy particles or thought or masses between terminals; the progress of particles or impulses or waves from Point A to Point B The four flows used in processing are flow one, something happened to self; flow two, doing something to another; flow three, others doing things to others; flow zero, self doing something to self
Lots has been written on the concept of flow and "flow states" In their 1987 book "Peopleware, Productive Projects and Teams", Tom DeMarco and Tim Lister defined flow as "a condition of deep, nearly meditative involvement" Anyone who's worked on a task only to find that unknowing hours have passed has experienced it The important points are that, firstly, it's a much more productive state and secondly, it's enjoyable Many expert opinions to the contrary, satisfying both of those points leads to very successful software indeed