A few minor mistakes apart, your writing is good.
- À part quelques petites erreurs, ta composition est bonne.
Apart from her temper, she's all right.
- À part son caractère, elle est très bien.
Aside from this, he was in good health.
- À part cela, il était en bonne santé.
... But maybe we should set aside a small part of the world. ...
... all in this very small part of the world. ...